vo baat baat par tera therna yaad aata hai
mera roothna aur tera manna yaad aata hai
mere latifho par gussa dikhana aur phir
tera vo halke se muskurana yaad aata hai
waqt ka yun tham sa jana
vo tera mere kareeb aana yaad aata hai
vo sar juka kar muskurana
teri ankho se samunder me doob jana yaad aata hai
zuda karti hai jab hawa
zard patton ko shakho se
palkhe kuch nam si ho jati hai
tera mujhse yun dur jana yaad aata hai
barso beet gaya tujhe yaad karte karte yun
ab teri yaadein bhi bhool gaya hun
bas tujhe yaad karna yaad aata hai
So Touching!
ReplyDeleteWell penned..the pain of loosing loved ones is hard to bear !
You should also use images for your poetry..they reflects feeling more intensely :)
@simran- thnks u very much. i smtym use images bt sm tym i m so engorssed wit ma poem tat i 4got dat ppl cn't get 2 sm feelin as i m.... bt i ll try 2 do it....:):)
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